I Was Thinking

“I was thinking about my mother the other day,” Lori said. Rick looked up, rattled his newspaper and stared at her.

“Yes,” he intoned.

“Well, you know that it’s getting harder and harder for her to get up and down the stairs.” Lori hesitated for a moment and then added, “And she’s lonely, too.”

Rick set the newspaper down on the table with a slight thump. “And?”

Lori hated the way that he made her feel sometimes. Like now, for instance. She felt like a child, incapable of an intelligent thought.

She stood up straight and looked him square in the eye. “I want to ask Mom to move in with us. We have the room now that the kids are on their own.” She twisted the dish towel in her hands nervously, waiting for her husband’s reply.

He stirred his coffee deliberately and thought for a moment. Lori’s mother was okay. She hadn’t interfered much over the years. But he knew that his mother -in-law was much more astute than her daughter who tended to take things at face value. Rick bit his upper lip. He and Mariel would have to more discreet. But then again, he thought, Lori would be busy with her mother. They’d go out shopping and to lunch and movies. Things Lori didn’t usually do. It seemed that she had almost no friends and rarely went out. The only social life she had was as his wife, when she entertained important clients or went with him to those boring dinners he was obligated to attend. She  enjoyed those evenings though, and would dress up and gossip excitedly all the way home. And she was a superb hostess—a great cook with a flair for decorating and using clever themes.

When he thought about Lori, it seemed strange  that she had so few friends. When he met her in college, she was bubbly and loved to be around people. In fact, she had drawn him out of his shell, taking him to all sorts of parties and concerts. People were naturally drawn to Lori, like a moth to a flame. She had what they called charisma.

After they married, Lori buried herself in raising their family and eventually she had little to say that was of any consequence—at least to Rick. Maybe that’s why I strayed, he thought.  She was just boring.

And he still had a slim waist and a full head of hair. He found that the Mariels of the world were plentiful and willing.

Lori rinsed the dishes and placed them in the dishwasher with a clank.

Rick smiled slyly and said, “Well, let’s do it! Your Mom’s a great old gal and it would be fun to have another person here.”

Lori was giddy with excitement as she hurried to the den to call Mom. She thought about how surprised Rick would be that her Mom’s belongings were already packed in boxes and cartons. All that remained was for the movers to come.

Lori bit her lip to stop from smiling. What did Rick take her for, she wondered, a babe in the woods? Wouldn’t he be surprised if he knew about the plan she and her mother had devised to deal with his flagrant  affairs? She was amazed at how good her Mom was at using the internet. Wasn’t it shocking that you could find a poison that was virtually untraceable at a web site?

Lori and her Mom couldn’t wait to start cooking and baking all of Rick’s favorites. It would take about a month to do the job.

Lori smiled, thinking about how delighted she would be to have Mom live with her.

 

 

 

About Kathy

I grew up in Buffalo,New York the second eldest child in a family that eventually included eight children. The neighborhood was an Irish-American enclave. These two facts explain a great deal about me. I spent many years as a teacher who really thought of herself as a writer.

10 Responses to I Was Thinking

  1. Marsha says:

    My – Oh my – I did not expect that : )

  2. Well, that takes care of that. Nice punch line at the end of this piece.

  3. Melanie says:

    What an interesting piece. Makes you really think and wonder.
    Mel

    • Kathy says:

      Glad you liked it! That’s exactly the response I hoped for.
      Please let your friends know about my blog.
      Thanks!!

  4. Now that was a fantastic piece of writing. The tables were turned at the end. Rick would be done in by his own suggestion to have his mother-in-law move in to keep Lori busy so he could have his affairs. With Lori’s and her Mom’s scheming, soon there would be no more Rick or his affairs.
    Your piece was truly entertaining.
    Kudos!

  5. Stephen Duffin says:

    Hi Kathy,

    Thanks for your comments on my story Maud at EDF. I thought I’d check out your website and stumbled upon this.

    What a story!

    What a devious mind you have!

    I love the way the plot twists and turns in this, refuting all expectations – I had expected a rather tame but well-written ending where they all live happily ever after. But No! Poor old Rick. I guess he’ll get what he deserves!

    • Kathy says:

      Hello Stephen. Thanks for checking out my blog. Now you know why I loved the ending of Maud so much!
      I really enjoyed your story and hope to see you on EDF again.

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